Draft magazine cover for First Impressions

This is my first draft for my magazine cover, I new I had to add a lot to it. I was not happy with where the writing was positioned. However I was very happy with the picture. I thought of the title because I didn't want to go for something that would be very typical for a film magazine and as I was making a trailer I thought it would be perfect.
I wanted to add another movie it the magazine somewhere, as my main audience would be female I thought the film 'Sex and The City' would be perfect.
The picture I chose was to show a bit about the movie. It shows some sort of relationship between the two characters in the film. This keeps the audience wanting to know if there really is 'love off the screen'. As the female character is looking the the camera this shows a connection to her and the readers. The male character is looking away but towards the female a bit this shows a certain sort of mystery that the reader would want in there male character.